Kevin Roche (kproche) wrote,
Kevin Roche
kproche

Tonka 18 April 2014

Puddles like oceans
Devour sandy skyscrapers
As April rains fall.
Come afternoon sun shining
They will rise beneath rainbows!


ETA: Ok, I know no rewrites, I know, but the fourth line is making my teeth ache.



Puddles like oceans
Devour sandy skyscrapers
As April rains fall.
With the afternoon sunshine
They will rise beneath rainbows!

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